Thursday, March 9, 2017

Paper #2 Rhetorical Analysis-Final Draft

Jose Mejia
Ms. Reyes
English 1302-65R
3/8/2017
Twitters: “Captain ‘America’”



Whether it’s with a “tweet”, the notorious “hashtag” or even a spontaneous picture upload, Twitter has found many ways to let people all over the world express their stories. Thousands, and even millions of posts are posted and passed along through twitter implementing opinions of all kind. All posts mainly are made or composed of national or even global situations that are happening. One’s opinion can be another’s total opposing reason on what they believe is right or wrong on certain dilemmas. Chris Evans, better known as “Captain America”, uses twitter almost on a constant basis. He solidifies his word and is outspoken on anything that comes to mind. More than anything Evans or “Steve Rogers”, was ironically a big vocal leader in his opinions towards the past Presidential Campaign.

Mr. Evans mentions in this self-writing platform, “Obviously must prioritize keeping Americans safe. But we mustn’t become Un-American in the process.” Chris Evans was a tremendous Hilary Clinton follower during the past Campaign, seeming to always have support on what she thought was right. More than anything, “Steve Rogers”, was totally against the now President, Donald Trump. To further breakdown this post Evans states that the priority more than anything is to keep America safe. Agreeing with this push towards the nation in his opinion is great, but the “Un-American” manner in which Mr. Trump is heading towards, is what bothers him. Regardless whether it’s dislike towards Trump, or a huge amount of gratitude towards keeping America safe, “Captain America” knows that his post should be heard and taken into consideration. Twitter allowed Evans to have his voice heard by every single one of his followers.

Chris Evans’s tweet displays in an attempt through false authority appeal with Ethos as well as Pathos to construct an identity which in this fallacy contradicts the post.

Evans ineffective appeal to Ethos hurts his attempt to construct a heroic identity. The audience in respective to this manner is more than anything the American people. More specifically the Americans who were involved in voting and who are heavily followers of making the country better on all aspects. “Captain America” or “Steve Rogers” can be seen to any of his followers or fans as a respective hero in the fantasy world. In the real world, Chris Evans is just like any other sub-ordinary American. Although being a celebrity, Evans has the same rights as any other ordinary person. The ineffectiveness of Ethos in this situation is what truly disconnects the fan base away from the actual knowledge on the Presidential Campaign. Seen as a hero and an important icon in the “Avengers” movies doesn’t give enough credibility to the actor portraying him. In Ramage, Bean, and Johnson’s, “Writing Arguments: A Rhetoric with Readings,” the authors mention something known as the ‘Rhetorical Triangle’ (pg.55). This structure or template characterized key points such as the audience, message and the writer or speaker. Ethos in this book is defined to focus its attention on the writer’s character. However, Chris Evans isn’t portraying himself as “Captain America” or “Steve Rogers”, he’s portraying himself, as himself. This fallacy is true to where it’s seen as a false authority because he’s not showing true ethical appeal to ‘His’ specific audience.

In addition, this post is generally also very connected to the audience intended by using the Pathos emotion.  Chris Evans’s attempt in connecting with his followers is the focus in which he is going towards for in his post. Although not saying this while posing as “Captain America”, Evans makes sure that any followers of politics or of making America a better place are aware of his valid opinion. Is it credible? Yes, it’s credible to those whom the post is reaching out for. He’s sympathizing by using the overall aspect of “America” and how it’s going to be viewed after the elections. Anderson remarks in his readings, “Our stories form, inform, and re-form our sources of knowledge, our views of reality” (Anderson 212). The post Evans tweeted was credible, persuasive to the audience and overall a powerful opinion.


In essence, any reader or analysis or reads this post can gain a lot from what its true meaning may be. Being able to break down this post is what’s going to allow any follower of his or even opposing American to further connect with what Evans is trying to compel. This post is able to connect to other such arguments, especially those who oppose and are in favor of what the President is doing to better the country. It sparks a debate, but also has lots of reason because of the ‘American’ way the nation has always been. 



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Ramage, John D., John C. Bean, and June Johnson. Writing Arguments: A Rhetoric with Readings. Boston: Pearson, 2016. Print.




1 comment:

  1. Hi Jose- Mrs. Reyes here. I think what this post is showing, more than anything, is that you are learning about rhetoric and how layered, complex and fun self-writing can be. I think there are some spots where your writing is unclear, and there are also problems with spelling, capitalization and clarity that hurt your ethos; try to visit a writing tutor for your next Final Draft to make sure those problems are taken care of. Pay close attention to how you decide to organize your paper. your summary paragraph had some issues, as far as how you organized those sentences; the reader was left having to guess what Evans is responding to in some ways. Overall, I can see that you are gaining an introduction into the world of rhetoric, and that is what this class is about.

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