After
receiving feedback from my peer, their comments have boosted my knowledge of
how my ideas are well organized and presented. My introduction thus far, is the
best thing about my blog. I introduced my platform accordingly and distinctly
with affordances that provides the reader with insight on what the app is all
about. Throughout the semester, we’ve studied and read all sorts of chapters on
the course book. These chapters have opened my mind and led me to improve on
how I shape my paragraphs. Transitional phrases have improved my blog as well,
in making it more fluid to read and able to understand important details. My
thesis is engaging, according to my peer, but putting it where it must be is
key to making it more credible. My conclusion is the biggest weakness of my
writing. This past Friday, Ms. Reyes mentioned a ton of valuable ideas in which
I can use to better form and compose my conclusion.
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