After receiving feedback
from my peer, I’ve learned the strongest part of my writing was my proper
introduction. Giving a brief summary of my platform and the affordances provided by my platform further made my introduction and the beginning of my
essay easy to comprehend. The post in which I chose to mention that was a part of
my self-writing platform was, according to my peer, well analyzed and
explained. Mentioning Chris Evans’s support of Hilary Clinton in the past
presidential election backs up the support of what Mr. Evans posted about
staying, “American”. In order for my essay to be more fluid and profound, my
peer suggested to connect such of my ideas in a better format. I learned that I
wrote my essay too much like as if I’m directly answering the provided material
for the assignment. I have the information as to what this essay pertains to,
but in order to sound proper, I must use a certain point of transition phrases
and ideas to sound credible.
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